I like the original version, the No. 3 looks more like a image, more classical drawing,
The first painting has nice nuances of colours, transparency of the tissue. It is a bit dark, but richer in the painting[size=78%].[/size]
I ma the flat with me, cleaned-up, not undercoated, to be planned when my current works are completed; the subject is very nice, but on the some 18 versions on pictures I have, I have not yet determined hoiow different I can paint it .... it is maturing !!