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Serhan Oflas

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Re: Nurseza Sultan
« Reply #19 on: September 23, 2016, 05:46:22 AM »
Cant wait to see them painted by you Michel  :)


I am busy with the work for couple of months, I have to paint my hussar plate too..

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Hannibal

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« Reply #18 on: September 23, 2016, 05:22:03 AM »
Not easy !
I can'take the cllenge to ânt it know, I have a long list, some from you too ....
Michel
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Serhan Oflas

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Re: Nurseza Sultan
« Reply #17 on: September 23, 2016, 04:20:35 AM »
Hello,


I tried to paint one but not liked result much.. I may try paint another later on..


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Re: Nurseza Sultan
« Reply #16 on: August 14, 2016, 04:12:58 PM »
Ready to RTV...


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dufour

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Re: Nurseza Sultan
« Reply #15 on: August 12, 2016, 03:00:10 PM »
With pleasure ,
Lovely girl ,

Serhan Oflas

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Re: Nurseza Sultan
« Reply #14 on: August 12, 2016, 01:10:42 PM »
I concluded this project..


Michel and Dufour thanks for your constructive comments..


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dufour

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Re: Nurseza Sultan
« Reply #13 on: August 12, 2016, 05:21:20 AM »
It s looks better but i don't like the clo thés on the arm,
« Last Edit: August 12, 2016, 04:21:20 PM by dufour »

Hannibal

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« Reply #12 on: August 11, 2016, 05:35:40 PM »
Well done Serhan !!!!

But check crefully again the tip of the nose, most important on a face with the eyes !!

looking at it:
- its tip looks damaged ?, not rounded
- shorter nostril on the left (her right) than right side
- severe shadow, crease on the left, smoother slope on the right along the nose ??

Michel
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Serhan Oflas

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Re: Nurseza Sultan
« Reply #11 on: August 11, 2016, 04:53:26 PM »
Hello.


Yes Brian :D Jewellery finished..


Respect to teacher always  ;)




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Re: Nurseza Sultan
« Reply #10 on: August 11, 2016, 04:06:50 PM »
"What do you think can I start jewelery on head"        hahaha
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Hannibal

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Re: Nurseza Sultan
« Reply #9 on: August 10, 2016, 04:39:27 PM »
Yes, for me better,
I would add a relief line starting from the right side of the nose and going down to the left (as visible on the painting) = slight because women hate this, sign of aging; or leave it to the painter ....

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Michel
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Serhan Oflas

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Re: Nurseza Sultan
« Reply #8 on: August 10, 2016, 03:53:25 PM »
Hate ?? since no other make a to do list like you, I will not hate nobody hahaha...


I hope, I more or less closed most of your remarks Michel, in some part I really started to worry that I broke off all but its like ok :D


Anyways, my version is different with the reference and head slighty more turned to her right ..


What do you think can I start jewelery on head?




Hannibal

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« Reply #7 on: August 10, 2016, 12:29:15 PM »
Bravo !! several points are improved.  So I enlarged the face again, and ....

[ You will hate me definitively for this !!

I have 12 small remarks as following

1) The fes (gat) should be flush on the hair, not recessed (no shadow) = flat contact
2) The angle of the top of the hat to be sharp, not rounded
3)  Same for the angle = like a culinder
4) Same for the side = almost a rectangle
5) The tissue may have a angle from its centre towards the hair to have some roundness, not flat
6) The contact between the shesh (tissue) and the hair must be close touching, not this dark striation line alnong their contact
7) The nose has a recessed surface at that point, look with light on the side !
8) The side of the nose is not totally well formed, check again
9) The chine should niot have a recessed shape after the round bead = this will give shadows = the end of the chin has a bead, is it not reality
10) Make closeer contact between the hair and the skin = not this bead and strong line = sweet, soft contact
11) the   xxx extends too much to the centre of the face, unlike the other side = assymetrical
12)) and last remark : drwaing a vertical yellow line yellow line from the top of the ead to the lips, the nose is still assymetrical, particularly at its end point, please check this carefully, giving shadows from the side left, and right, important for a nice face


Sorry, threw me away ... or I'll do this by email separately ....

Michel
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Serhan Oflas

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Re: Nurseza Sultan
« Reply #6 on: August 10, 2016, 11:54:02 AM »
Its really hard to work with female subjects..


They asking lot... as it is in real life  ;D .


Not promising much yet..


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Serhan Oflas

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Re: Nurseza Sultan
« Reply #5 on: August 09, 2016, 04:49:20 PM »
Those most problems are caused becasue I tried whole piece carved from a block cut and no addition piece used.


I will totally delete hair details and make as addition details. So that I could catch more curly realistic appearence I thought..


Anyways we will see what will be at the end :D


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