Looks much better,
Congratulation for the effort of doing all again, with a better result.
But I also understand that the engravor has not given you muh chance to paint a nice face !
In the future, you have two choices:
1) threw the flat away before starting to paint , or
2) file the face flat and paint a face like on a paper surface!
I have had this problem 2 or 3 times, and I chose 2) .
Today I would select 1) as life is becoming too short for me to waste too much time in repairing what should be right at start.... and too muh choice with other flats ...