Hi Brian,
It is so nice to see my Figure in painting from you! She got a nice expression and you got the skincolour very nice! (I told you already) Maybe, if you like, you could soften the Nable at her tommy. To me it looks a bit to dark an to heavy contrast. But only, if you think, you want to change that. Sometimes it is dangerous to try to make something better, and than it doesn't work out, an the frustration is big. Anyway a good paint job you have done!! Best regards, Julia